Custom of the Week: Daphne and Apollo

I am super excited about this week’s custom-that’s-not-a-custom because it has to do with the book I just started editing: Apollo and Daphne! If you haven’t read the Apollo and Daphne myth, find the nearest copy of Ovid’s Metamorphoses and start reading – it’s one of my favorites. So much so that I wrote a contemporary YA re-telling of the myth, which you are going to hear a lot about this year as I try to get it ready to send out. Needless to say, when I came across the following artwork of Daphne turning into a tree as Apollo looks on, I knew I had to feature it on my blog. In fact, it’s becoming my computer wallpaper as well!

Daphne and Apollo, by Xanadove

I love the surprise on Daphne’s face. I’m sure she did not expect her plea for help to end up turning her into a tree!

 
If you have a pony that you would like featured as Custom of the Week, please email me: rebeccaenzor@gmail.com

Update #1

Time to try something new this week: I’m going to start keeping accountable to my fabulous readers by updating you on what I’m doing/have done for the week (not just writing-wise, but life-wise too). I have a feeling this year is going to be busy, so I’ll probably need someone to get the whip out if I want to get everything done.

And by busy, I mean awesome.

I have to admit, I’m having a pretty damn good year so far. January isn’t even over with and I’ve already started doing yoga twice a week, dropped some fat from my middle (my pants, which were starting to get tight a couple weeks ago, are now fitting normally again) and stopped drinking wine on the weekdays (I have a feeling this is more to do with the dropping fat than the yoga, since I’ve been doing yoga since September :P ).

I’ve read more books in the past two weeks than I did for the last two months of 2011.

I finished The Nameless Warrior (which took me all of last year to re-write… twice) and did my first read-through of Apollo to get ideas for what needs to happen there. I sent it to my First Readers for ideas and feedback, and wrote a list of all of Apollo’s goals for the novel. I’m still trying to figure out which is goal #1, which will then dictate what type of re-writing I need to do (the top three contenders are: “Get dad to notice me (in a positive way)”, “get a scholarship for school”, and “get over the fact that I accidentally killed my girlfriend”. The daddy-issues are definitely the longest, but the scholarship and dead girlfriend guilt are a bit more immediately pressing).

I also bought a new water heater. Yay for hot water!

On the agenda for the next week:

Continue with the yoga, not drinking, and having hot water.

Finish reading Crash Into You and Dies Irae.

Find someone who knows Olympia, Washington, as well as someone who is an expert in the Apollo myths (if you know anyone who qualifies for either please let me know, or point them my way!). Start building a chapter by chapter outline of the novel, and figure out what is the #1 goal in Apollo’s life. Storyline how his parents met, and how things progressed to having a bastard child that daddy wouldn’t claim.

I’d say that’s a pretty reasonable list for next week. Is there anything that you need to be held accountable for next week? I’ll get the whip out >:)

Playing Catch-up

Yesterday was supposed to be Fie Eoin Friday, but I must admit – I’m a little burnt out on what has become “The Nameless Warrior” right now. Critiques are trickling in – most of them good, although I do have a few week spots I still need to work on (someone called Kaye a harpy, and someone else said they were surprised she moved to [redacted] and suddenly forgot to wear panties :P Kindra’s getting straight A’s so far though!). I’ve started reading through Apollo to see what needs work there (pacing, tension, and I feel like he’s a bit of a wimp for an athletic high school boy), and I’m lining up some trusted First Readers for that project. Mostly though, I’m catching up on my TBR pile.

I finished Game of Thrones, read A Million Suns and Phoenix Feather, will be finishing The Near Witch this weekend, and will be reading Dies Irae this weekend as well (PS. Christine will be here on Feb 6th with a guest post on what inspired her new series!). I still have the rest of the Fire and Ice series, Delirium, The Silver Eagle (I won a hardcover of this book, and it’s been so long that the NEXT hardcover in the series has come out!), 11/22/63, Elemental Magic, Beautiful Creatures, The Clockwork Prince, Cornerstone, The Six Elements of Style, and Crash Into You that I can think of off the top of my head. Also a few little crit projects for some of the lovely people who read The Nameless Warrior for me.

That doesn’t even include Google Reader. I’m afraid to even look at the link to that, for fear it might burst into flames and consume me.

But it feels good to start coming back from Fie Eoin. I’ve been living there for so long it’s strange to come back to the real world again. Pulling my head out of the “editing zone” and reading for fun, or *gasp* playing WoW, feels like wasting time. I have to keep reminding myself that there is no deadline. I don’t have to constantly carry around my red pen and be on alert for weak sentences (btw, do you know how hard it is to find a weak sentence in A Million Suns? Do you? If you don’t you should go pick up a copy and grab a red pen. I dare you to mark a single page).

So I’m not quite back to the world of the living and blogging, but I’m catching up. Is there anything exciting in your life that I missed while I was gone?

Warm Fuzzies Blogfest #4

Eeep! It’s the last week of the Warm Fuzzies Blogfest! It’s been a fun month getting to know other authors and spreading the writing love around and I have to say a big Thank You to Juliana for hosting :) And for the last blogfest challenge she’s given us a very warm fuzzy: What is a scene that you are proud of? One that made you go “Yes! I can do this!”

Since most of the scenes I’m proud of in Fie Eoin are near the end and give away major plot points, I’m going to put up something from Apollo and Daphne. I haven’t really talked much about Apollo and Daphne on this blog, but I love this story (based on the Apollo and Daphne myth) and I LOVE these characters. I plan on working on Apollo once Fie Eoin is out on submission, and I cannot wait!

So, although the scene itself isn’t so warm and fuzzy, it is one that I’m proud of. I give you: Apollo and Daphne!

The bell rang for homeroom and everyone began to amble out to their first hour class. Eros had an evil look in his eye that Apollo didn’t like, but ignored him as they walked into the hall.

“That’s quite the face,” Eros said and Apollo kept walking. “Did Daphne kiss it for you? Make it all better this weekend? Or was she the one who beat the shit out of you?”

“I was in a car accident.” Apollo didn’t slow down. His next class was all the way on the other side of the building and he didn’t want to be late.

Eros didn’t let up though; it seemed he didn’t care if he was late to his next class, which was in the opposite direction. “So she dumped you for no good reason, huh? I know how that goes.”

Apollo stopped so quickly that Eros almost ran into him. He turned and scowled into Eros’ face. “No. She dumped you for a very good reason. She dumped you because you are a scumbag and a bastard of a human being.”

“Huh,” Eros grinned. “And here I heard that you were the bastard.”

It was something in the way he said it that Apollo knew Eros wasn’t talking about his behavior. He was talking about his father.

“You see,” Eros continued, the grin on his face growing at the same rate as the dread on Apollo’s. “I was making friends with the Niobe kids the other day. And they were telling me that there were two other students at Oly with an interesting parentage-“

Rage took over and Apollo shoved Eros into the lockers, holding him there as he tried to shrink back. Apollo’s arm came back to punch him in the face but someone grabbed his wrist and Apollo turned on them, teeth clenched and all of his anger in his eyes. It died inside him as Daphne flinched back and he dropped his arms, releasing Eros.

“Don’t hit him,” Daphne whispered.

“Give me one good reason not to.” It felt like a growl in his throat instead of words, he was so angry. Angry at Niobe’s kids for telling, angry at Eros for using it against him, angry at Daphne for stopping him.

“He’s already halfway down the hall,” she smiled briefly, then swallowed. She looked guilty, apologetic, and worried. “Eros isn’t worth it.”

“You were the one who told me to punch him next time.”

“Yeah, but not at the expense of everything. Are you trying to get kicked out of UW? Because NYU isn’t going to accept you if you’re suspended for fighting.” She tried to smile again before she looked down at her feet.

She was trying to joke about it? Right now, when she had dumped him as both a boyfriend and a friend just for being accepted at UW? Apollo made a disgusted noise in his throat and walked away. Now she wanted to reconcile? Now after everything that had happened? No thank you.

“Poe, wait.”

He walked faster.

“Apollo, stop.” She ran to catch up with him and grabbed his arm. He winced – it was still bruised there – and she let go quickly. “I want to talk to you.”

“Well, I’m sorry, but you had your chance. I don’t want to talk to you anymore.”

He turned again to leave but she stepped in front of him. He thought that was pretty brave since he had just slammed someone into a locker and tried to punch their face, but he supposed she knew he could never hit her. Even telling her that he didn’t want to talk took all the anger and courage that he could afford. When she stepped in his way his shoulders sagged and he closed his eyes.

“Poe, I really need to talk to you.”

“Did you know,” he said, his voice quiet so that no one else would hear him, “that when Hyacinth died I tried to kill myself? I took a bunch of pills and my mother had to rush me to the hospital and pump my stomach. Because it was so hard to deal with.” He opened his eyes and looked at her, “but it’s been even harder trying to deal with you dumping me. Because I’m still hurt from Hy’s death, and because I know that if she had the choice she would have stayed with me, but you? You dumped me, and fired me, and then told me that you wouldn’t even be my friend anymore. So maybe my car accident was less an accident than an attempt to get away from it all. Because it hurts. It hurts So. Fucking. Bad.”

Daphne was silent as she stared at him. He had shocked her into silence, and he preferred it that way. And while she was still in shock he stepped around her and continued on his way to class, stepped in just as the bell rang and sat down next to Cassie, who smiled at him.

Happy Autumn!

Autumn actually started on Friday, but it’s hard to tell that it started at all in Charleston. The trees are still green, the air is still muggy and hot, and everyone’s still wearing sundresses and sandals. I plan on going to the beach at least one more time before I put my bathing suits away (yes, I have more than one. I LIVE at the beach during summer!), and while I’ve had my first pumpkin latte of the year I had to get it as a frappuccino.

But I celebrated the equinox on Friday with a harvest feast and the one thing that really makes it feel like autumn to me: the scents of fall.

Mmmmm. You can smell that can’t you? The cinnamon broom whisking all of the negativity out of the house and hanging by the door so it smells delightful every time you open the door. The candle that smells like pumpkin pie, or apple cider, or clove. The oil burner with sandalwood and frankincense. Rosemary and thyme in the kitchen. And best of all? The smell of cooler weather sneaking in at night when the sun’s gone down just a little bit earlier than last night. Take in a deep breath, and let out a happy sigh.

When I start smelling those classic scents of autumn it makes me want to curl up next to the fireplace, notebook and pen in hand, and start writing. Get lost in the woods of Fie Eoin as the leaves change color. Sit on the shore of Loch Ness and pet a kelpie. Go to a football game and snuggle in close with Apollo. Take Mikayla for a horseback ride by the river. Jump off a cliff with Neona.

What’s your favorite scent of fall? Where does it take you when you smell it?

NaNo Prep

Back when I was a practicing Wiccan (it didn’t stick, I really sucked at being a witch. I really suck at being anything with a set practice of rituals) I read in a book on Wiccan rituals that the circle started well before calling the corners and lighting the candles. It started when you got into the mind set. It started in the preparations. And it’s the same way for NaNo. Wrimos love November because they finally get to start writing, but I love October. I love the preparation and the anticipation. I love getting in the mind set of writing like a maniac.

One of my Wiccan friends told me that she uses a certain CD to get in the mind set for a ritual. Her ritual starts when she turns on the CD and begins to prepare for the circle. And her brain is now hard-wired to get into that mind set whenever she hears those songs, even if it’s the middle of a random Tuesday. So I tried that, and it worked. To this day when I hear the Prologue to “The Book of Secrets”, by Loreena McKennit, I am immediately put in the frame of mind of the ritual. And I can do the same for my writing. “The Mystic’s Dream” or “All Souls Night” (also Loreena McKennit) puts me right into Fie Eoin, wherever I am. Most of Loreena’s songs put me in Fie Eoin. Mat Kearney conjures up Apollo and his crew. “Come Alive” by the Foo Fighters makes me think of Holly and the Manticore, or Karigan and Bar depending on my mood. Many Dave Matthews songs make me think of Rebecca and Lane. And “What I Wouldn’t Do” by A Fine Frenzy or “St Stephen’s Cross” by Vienna Teng makes me think of Neona and Book of Souls.

It’s a convenient little trick, using music to put you in the right frame of mind. When I want to work on Fie Eoin – no matter what I’m doing – I can turn on the playlist and I’m there, ready to listen to Kindra and Kaye. And when I’m planning Book of Souls this month and writing it next month I’ll play A Fine Frenzy, Vienna Teng, and the Avatar soundtrack (I happened to be storylining BoS when I first listened to the soundtrack, so instead of reminding me of the movie it now puts me straight into Neona’s world. Unfortunately the CD doesn’t work in my car or on my work computer :/).

What about you? Do you have any rituals to prepare and get yourself in the writing mind frame? Are there any albums or songs that remind you of your characters and your worlds?

Don’t forget to visit the other Wrimos in the blogchain and find out how they prepare for NaNoWriMo!

Writing Compelling Characters

Today’s topic comes courtesy of The Great Blogging Experiment. Go check it out, because there are (at the time of this post) 174 bloggers signed up to write about the same topic in one giant chain of character blogginess. Shutup, spellcheck, that is too a word.

As anyone popping over from the Experiment may not know, this blog is almost all character-related. I talk about my characters. I talk about what makes them tick, why I love them, and why other people love them. I splash in a little bit of world-building and the occasional writing advice, but mostly this is a blog about the way my characters are developing. How I am trying to make them grow and learn and become compelling characters to read about.

So what do I think makes a compelling character? Struggle. There must be some internal struggle that lets you know they aren’t just a cut and paste paper doll. Kindra struggles with what she wants in life versus what she promised her father. Rebecca struggles with her secrets (so many secrets and lies). Apollo struggles with guilt, Holly struggles with stress of all sorts. Everyone has a problem that they have to learn to deal with, and none of them gets it right the first time. Or even the second time. They aren’t perfect. They all struggle with life and they all struggle with balancing what they want to do with what they should do. Just like you and me.

That’s really what makes a character feel real. That’s what makes them compelling.

For other takes on what makes a character compelling, don’t forget to check out The Great Blogging Experiment!

What is YOUR favorite myth?

Hey guys, I know I posted earlier this week already, but I just re-read last year’s NaNo-Novel “Apollo and Daphne” (yes, it could have been brought on by people searching for Apollo and Daphne as part of their classics homework and being sent to this blog), and I always thought I would do a whole series of these retold Myths. But I don’t know what other myths to do. Orpheus and Eurydice, of course, since it is my favorite. Maybe Persephone, because I can see making a storyline out of a girl getting all wrapped up with some older man and her mother being pissed.

What do you think? What are your favorite myths? Favorite gods? Do you prefer some other pantheon to that of the Greeks? (I could make this into a whole world of different myths – Egyptian, Norse, ect) I’m really interested to hear what others think, because I think this could be really fun. And I’m always interested in learning new myths!

Point of view. Or rather, a certain point that I view things from.

I’m starting to think that I might be kind of weird.

No, hear me out now.  Really.

Last night I was writing some Fie Eoin, because I sorta, kinda, am really in love with it, and I realized that I always look at Fie Eoin from the southeast.  Whenever I see Fie Eoin in my mind, I’m looking from the southeast.  No matter where I am in the village.  If I’m in the center of the village then Kindra’s tent is directly to the left of me, the High Priestess’ two over to the right.  The HP’s tent is directly east (where the sun rises – woah boy the symbolism!), but I always kind of look between the two.  Even inside the tents I look from the southeast at the tent.  I never stand in the doorway and look into the tent – I’m always looking from behind a cot.  It’s the weirdest thing.  And I just realized it last night.

The only time I look from another direction is during the wedding scene (who gets married? I’m not telling!) when I look from the southwest.  I only do it for a moment before I’m back in the east.  I only look that way while Susan is being killed, because I wouldn’t be able to see her from the southeast (and who doesn’t want to watch someone being killed at a wedding?).  It’s the same in Aleda – I look from the southeast.  Same in Gaerlom (you would think I’d look at the village from the ocean, but no, I look from the forest which makes no real sense).  Same in Fie Obsid.  Same all throughout Pike’s Revenge.  What is this obsession with the southeast?

I started thinking of other stories, and what direction I look at them from.  Let’s see, Apollo? Southeast, unless you are in his house, where it changes to northeast.  After Ancient? Southeast until they get to the Mississippi Ocean.  Phooka Tales?  hmmmm, yep, southeast.  Even the manor is on the southeastern shore of the Loch Ness.  Lane’s Girl? Ah Ha!  I look at Lane’s Girl from the north.  I can prove it, just take a look at the drawing of Archein I made on a sticky.  The main gate is to the north, and the hidden gate to the west, and this is always the way I look at Archein – from the north.

So really this post has no reason behind it, other than to illustrate the face that I don’t like to look at things from the west.  Unless I’m standing on Sullivan’s Island Beach, which I will be doing all next week!  Don’t expect any posts from me while I’m on vacation ;)

The Sticky Note Story, and Daphne

Since so many people come to my page looking for information on sticky notes, I thought I would give you this link to satisfy your knowledge urge: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Post-it_note#History

Also, for those of you doing your classics homework: Daphne was turned into a Bay Laurel tree (thus, a ring of Laurel around the heads of winning Olympians).  Apollo loved her because Eros/Cupid struck him with an arrow, and Daphne hated Apollo for the same reason (her arrow was lead-tipped, making her loath him).  Eros was trying to teach Apollo a lesson, because Apollo made fun of him.  Daphne’s dad, a river spirit, was the one who turned her into a tree.  If you want to know more, read Ovid’s Metamorphoses (the photo on the cover is Daphne turning into the tree when Apollo finally catches her – it’s a beautiful sculpture).

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