Two-thirds Done with StO! (and a #WriteMotivation Update)

Happy Thursday, Aledan Merfolk! I’m happy to say I reached the 2/3 mark of StO this week, and I’m currently writing my favorite scene. It’s Finn’s happiest-ever moment, followed right away by his worst-ever moment (until the next worst moment, and the next one, and…this book is about to get really dark). The sex scene that I spent three weeks trying to get right is finally finished, and it made my boss blush, so it must be good ;) It also led to some excellent CP comments, my favorite being: “if they’re small & perky, there’s gonna be pinching.”


I think I just realized I’ll never be a YA author.

June is also a #WriteMotivation month for me, so here are my goals:

1. Either finish drafting StO, OR finish changing Erie’s POV to first person. Working on finishing StO before I go back and fix Erie’s POV. I’m still trying to figure her out.

2. Catch up on Science Tuesdays. Oh gosh, I haven’t posted these since February. It’s going to be scary.

3. Morning Swims! I did this twice last week, but this week Hubs left for a business trip and took the pool fob with him, so I couldn’t open the gate (it’s a neighborhood pool). He’s back, so I’m going to try to swim tomorrow morning. I DID buy a new bathing suit that fits, so I can swim without flashing the world :P

4. Don’t forget to cheer on the other bloggers. *cheers* I haven’t gone to any blogs yet, but I’m going to work on it next week :)

So far, so good-ish. Now back to destroying Finn and Erie’s lives! (It’s ok, StO isn’t a tragedy)

P.S. if you missed the #MyWritingProcess Blog Tour on Monday, you can find it here.

Back from Staycation

The last day of staycation, with Boudin and the new patio table.

The last day of staycation, with Boudin and the new patio table.

Happy Friday, Aledan Merfolk! I completely missed updating on Thursday due to the wonky holiday week and my brain still being partially in vacation mode (and the super smutty scene I was writing in StO). I’m back from my staycation, which started with Hops puking all day when we left for the beach, and ended with a new minifridge, patio table, and a cookout with friends, complete with the game Cards Against Humanity. It’s “a party game for horrible people”, and if you’re a horrible person like me, you should check it out. It’s hilariously fun.

I’m happy to say I completed all my quick-turn CP projects before we left for the beach, and the time away from StO helped me figure out what to do with this sex scene I’ve been trying to get right for the past three weeks. I think I got it right yesterday ;) Now to write the realization that a Bad Life Decision was just made.

Next month I’ll be back on the #writemotivation bandwagon, trying to finish StO and keep on track with working out. I’m happy to say I woke up early the past two mornings in a row to swim laps at the community pool. My shoulders are sore, but I much prefer it to running.

There may not be a custom pony this weekend, because I’m having trouble getting permission lately to feature customs, but I’ll definitely be back on Monday with the Writing Process Blog Tour. If you haven’t done the Writing Process Blog Tour yet and would like to, let me know and I’ll tag you! See you Monday, Aledans.

Busy Busy, and Eleven Questions

Happy Thursday, Aledans! I’ve been a busy little bee lately. I kind of stalled out on StO, but I’ve been CPing instead. First for Diana Beebe (of PonyFest fame), then for Juliana (of being my best friend fame), and next week for Lauren (of just got an awesome agent fame). I love CPing, because not only do I get to read awesome books before anyone else, but I also get to put the analytical side of my brain to work. After all the drafting I’ve been doing on StO, my creative side needed a break.

It was definitely biting at the bit last night to be let back out (I even had a dream I was swimming with Erie), but I don’t think I’m going to have time until after vacation. Especially since vacation is a NO writing zone, and I have too much to finish before then. But since this year is a staycation, and we live near the beach, I think I’ll have plenty of inspiration to get back to my mermaid novel when I return ;)

That content vacation smile - I can't wait to have it again!

That content vacation smile – I can’t wait to have it again!

So, the long and short of it is: I might disappear from the blog for the rest of the month again, but I promise June will be back to normal! I was also not-quite-tagged by Shen Hart with a blog award (she was going to tag me, but the rules said she could only tag someone with less than 500 followers), so I decided to answer her questions anyways. Enjoy!

1. If it took no time or effort, which subject would you become an expert in? Genetics, hands down. For one, it’s pretty awesome, and two, I’ve already got a good head start since I took it in college ;)

2. What’s the worst book you’ve ever read? EYES OF THE DRAGON by Stephen King. I couldn’t get past the first chapter, although I tried because it ties into the DARK TOWER series, which is one of my favorites.

3. What is the most important thing to you? Well, that’s kind of a broad question. Friends and family and pets. And the environment. Cause if we screw that up there’ll be no more friends and family and pets.

4. What’s your idea of true bliss? Being happy with where I am in life.

5. How do you celebrate your successes? Wine! And lots of fun music.

6. What’s that one word you can never quite remember the spelling of? Sentence. Although I totally just got it right when I wrote it :P

7. What’s the one word you’d like everyone to describe you as? Content.

8. Where is your happiest memory located? Either Mackinac Island (wedding) or Key West (sailing) – both with Hubs <3

9. If money, practicality etc were no object, what’s your ideal mode of transport? Fins ;) But really, teleportation might be nice. Or my very own Nightcrawler.

10. Tell us about your journey to where you are now. If you’ve been around the blog long enough, you know I started writing in MLP RPGs (yes, really). Then I started writing MLP fanfics for my characters in those games (I still do, on occasion). Then I started writing fanfics for other worlds, like X-men, Dark Tower, and Invader ZIM (because GIR!). Then I was bored in a work meeting one day many many years ago *coughtwelvecough* and that was the exact moment I started storylining Fie Eoin – now known as THE NAMELESS WARRIOR.

Yes, I worked on that book for twelve years. At first I was just writing for fun, and for my friends to read a little story about twin girls, but at some point several years ago I decided I wanted to at least try to get it published. It was a complete mess and took several re-writes (including one in 2012 after an editor told me to throw it out and start over) before it was ready to query. And now it’s out in agent-land, looking for someone to love it.

A lot of those twelve years was spent on other projects, too. Lane’s Girl/The Rebecca Stories, Phooka Tales, After Ancient, Apollo and Daphne (which will someday be edited), and Book of Souls (which will someday be finished). There are also bits and pieces of other books scribbled down on stickies and in writing folders: Mio’s story, Parallel You, Reason Island, and something about a kid living underground in the Middle East that has no name or plot. Right now I’m working on my mermaid novel, SPEAK THE OCEAN.

11. What are your top three activities to participate in? I’d like to say Yoga, but it’s been months since I’ve actually gone to yoga. My favorite “activities” now involve reading on the beach with a glass of wine (which is technically three things in one!), so that could be why I gained ten pounds last year ;)

And that’s it for the questions! If you’d like to play along, feel free to link to your own answers in the comments section :) Have a good weekend, Aledans!

Cover Reveal: THE PAPER MAGICIAN by @CNHolmberg

Happy Trina’s Day, Aledans! If you’re looking for my weekly update post, I switched it to Tuesday so I could participate in a cover reveal for a CP of a CP, Charlie Holmberg. Her debut, THE PAPER MAGICIAN, hits shelves in September, and boy does it sound good!

Ceony Twill arrives at the cottage of Magician Emery Thane with a broken heart. Having graduated at the top of her class from the TagisPraff School for the Magically Inclined, Ceony is assigned an apprenticeship in paper magic despite her dreams of bespelling metal. And once she’s bonded to paper, that will be her only magic…forever.

Yet the spells Ceony learns under the strange yet kind Thane turn out to be more marvelous than she could have ever imagined—animating paper creatures, bringing stories to life via ghostly images, even reading fortunes. But as she discovers these wonders, Ceony also learns of the extraordinary dangers of forbidden magic.

An Excisioner—a practitioner of dark, flesh magic—invades the cottage and rips Thane’s heart from his chest. To save her teacher’s life, Ceony must face the evil magician and embark on an unbelievable adventure that will take her into the chambers of Thane’s still-beating heart—and reveal the very soul of the man.

But you’re not here for the pitch, are you? You’re looking for the artwork! And I don’t blame you, it’s freaking gorgeous!


You can add THE PAPER MAGICIAN to your Goodreads shelf here. Or learn more about Charlie at her website.

CharliePic1.1Born in Salt Lake City, Charlie was raised a Trekkie alongside three sisters who also have boy names. In addition to writing fantasy novels, she is also a freelance editor. She graduated from BYU, plays the ukulele, owns too many pairs of glasses, and hopes to one day own a dog. The Paper Magician is her debut novel and the first in a whimsical series exploring a world of magicians who animate manmade materials. She currently lives with her family in Utah.

*Actually* Back from Hiatus

Happy Tuesday Aledan Merfolk! I know I said a week and a half ago that I was back from hiatus, and then I disappeared again, but I’m actually back this time. In fact, on Thursday I’ll be hosting a Cover Reveal, which is why this update is going up on Tuesday instead of Thursday.

Although I haven’t been hanging around the blogosphere for the past month, I have made a ton of progress on StO lately. Late last week I decided to try writing a scene from Erie’s POV in first person, instead of third. That worked out so well that now I’m having to go back and change all her previous scenes to first person, which will help age her voice up a bit and make her a little more dangerous. As it is, she’s really sweet and innocent, and I just can’t imagine someone in her circumstances being that way. Plus, StO is an NA, and right now her voice is reading very much YA. I’m going to write a few more new scenes in her new POV to get a handle on it, then I’ll be going back through the first half to fix the scenes there. Then off to the CPs who haven’t had a chance to read the old version yet.

If you’re interested in reading a few short lines from StO, you can find them scattered about my Facebook page. Hopefully I’ll be able to switch the POV and finish the rest of this book before my vacation in May, but knowing me (and how often I decide to change things in this book), I wouldn’t count on it ;) Still, considering how many times I’ve had to go back and change things, and how much of a bitch April has been, I think I’m doing pretty good!

Have a wonderful week, Aledans, and don’t forget to come back on Thursday for the Cover Reveal of THE PAPER MAGICIAN by Charlie Holmberg!

Aly Grauer as Captain Joy Jones.

P.S. My BFF Aly Grauer has an awesome Kickstarter campaign going on right now for SPACE HAPPENS: “A feminist satire of contemporary science fiction developed, written and produced by women in Chicago comedy”

For just $26 you get a postcard written by your favorite character while drunk in an interstellar bar! Sounds pretty awesome, no?

Back from Hiatus!

Happy Thursday, Aledans! Two weeks ago I snuck out of the blogosphere for a while, but I’m back now. Things aren’t so crazy hectic around here, and I’m back to working on StO. Speaking of StO, I sent the first (edited) half of it to my CPs yesterday, and already received gold stars from two of them! In fact, they kind of forgot to actually critique it because they were so sucked into the story. And one of them already figured out a twisty bit, so yay for the clues working!


April 15th was National Dolphin Day!

I signed up for #WriteMotivation this month, but since the first half of the month was such a shit-meet-fan fest, I haven’t kept up with any of it, so I won’t even bother with my goals. Just know that I’m back, I’m starting to work on those goals again, and Custom of the Week will be going up like normal (and hopefully I’ll get back on track with Science Tuesday soon too, I have a couple months worth of science news to post!).